Beautiful descriptive writing

 

I had to share some of the online writing that I have been reading because I am so proud of how hard they are working and the pride they are taking in their work is just incredible. The photos are of some of the children that wanted to share their work.

I have also typed up some of the sentences that I have marked over the last few days because I feel they need to be seen by as many people as possible. THEY ARE AMAZING!!!!

 

The dragon has red, nasty eyes that glow like fire.

On top of his head stands black, spiky horns.

It smells like a bonfire in the sky.

He stamps his hairy feet through the mountains.

The dragon has a loud and terrifying roar!

He has sharp, pointy teeth, cutting though his mouth.

Rumbling from deep within his chest a thundering roar chased through the mountains.

Stretching slowly, the dragon opens his wings, ready to glide over the hills.

  1. Jayne Rodgers

    I just wanted to agree with what Mrs Shaw has said. I have been totally blown away by the quality of work the children are producing. I am super proud of each and every one of you. x

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