Beautiful story writing in Crew Jackson

Over the last two days we have done some beautiful story writing in Crew Jackson. The children were challenged to write the next part of our class text ‘My name is River’. The children worked really hard to include exciting verb choices, fronted adverbials, descriptive language, similes, personification as well as the tricky task of speech punctuated correctly! They loved reading their stories to a friend and gave excellent feedback about what they were proud of in their work linked to the fishbone features.