Class 7 have been busy this week editing the opening paragraph of our class text, The Rainbow Fish.
Children have partnered up to edit the paragraph, changing it to a different sea creature, using lots of different adjectives, making it even better and then writing it up in to their books in their most beautiful handwriting.
This is preparing them for next week when they are writing their own short story about an animal!
I have seen some Motivated Moe’s and Light Bulb Leo’s this week so I cannot wait to see their ideas develop when it comes to writing their very own stories!
Watch this space for some fabulous writing to be shared!
Mrs Faulding